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In the End...

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By KomalPublished 9 months ago 1 min read

I loved them with a heart unmasked,

THEY wore smiles like borrowed pasts.

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I gave balm and bravery whole,

THEY just leaned and left me cold.

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I arrived with moonlit grace,

THEY vanished—no final embrace.

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I was rain, a steady stream,

THEY were smoke inside a dream.

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I stood still as silence grew,

THEY found warmth in someone new.

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I called—only silence answered,

THEY opened doors to newer names.

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I offered soul and reverence,

THEY sought ease, not depth.

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I gave everything—still,

THEY found someone else.

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I dimmed while they chased light,

THEY danced in suns I birthed from night.

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I was ribs rehearsed in pain,

THEY took bows in love’s refrain.

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I held space through every fall,

THEY forgot I gave it all.

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I was nectar, lullaby,

THEY were weather passing by.

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I was magic, deep and wide,

THEY chose thrill where hearts can hide.

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I will scroll through smiles once shared,

THEY will seem like they once cared.

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I will ache, but still remain,

Not for peace—but strength from pain

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I will stand—not untouched,

But unbroken, still in bloom.

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I will remember, NOT erased—

Only faded, softer now.

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I was love in quiet ink,

I was love THEY could hardly hold.

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And no matter how much I gave—

In the end, I'd be REPLACED.

Stream of Consciousnesssad poetry

About the Creator

Komal

I write poems and stories that hit the feels.

When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.

𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋

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  • Lou Holz9 months ago

    This is breath-taking, wow. The final line was like a gut punch. such good writing, well done!

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    oof, this hits hard, komal. Well done

  • Maryam Batool9 months ago

    The ending? It hits harder than a dart! Beautiful poem ❤️💞

  • Caroline Craven9 months ago

    Gosh this was so sad but also I love the humility and acceptance too. Really love the line about them wearing smiles with borrowed pasts.

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmed9 months ago

    NICE WORK

  • Sid Aaron Hirji9 months ago

    This hits the feeling me hard. We become yesterdays news so easily

  • They danced in suns I birthed from night... 😭.... this one hit me deeper. Love this poem. Brilliant! ❤️

  • Colleen Walters9 months ago

    A favorite quote of mine " Not everyone will finish your journey with you. We have to learn to let folks off at their stop." So true...

  • Sandy Gillman9 months ago

    Every line captures the ache of being all-in with someone who couldn’t meet you there. This left me with a sad feeling, which means it was well written!

  • Rowan Finley 9 months ago

    This has so many poignant lines and it shows the power of our imagination and soulful emotional energy as humans. Great job 👏

  • L.I.E9 months ago

    Sad but real. A reminder to accept the fact that people come and go out of your life. Lovely poem. Like the structure of it.

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡9 months ago

    I love it, girl. It's all brilliant but I especially resonate with 'they sought ease, not depth'. ⚡💙⚡

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