
I loved them with a heart unmasked,
THEY wore smiles like borrowed pasts.
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I gave balm and bravery whole,
THEY just leaned and left me cold.
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I arrived with moonlit grace,
THEY vanished—no final embrace.
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I was rain, a steady stream,
THEY were smoke inside a dream.
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I stood still as silence grew,
THEY found warmth in someone new.
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I called—only silence answered,
THEY opened doors to newer names.
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I offered soul and reverence,
THEY sought ease, not depth.
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I gave everything—still,
THEY found someone else.
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I dimmed while they chased light,
THEY danced in suns I birthed from night.
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I was ribs rehearsed in pain,
THEY took bows in love’s refrain.
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I held space through every fall,
THEY forgot I gave it all.
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I was nectar, lullaby,
THEY were weather passing by.
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I was magic, deep and wide,
THEY chose thrill where hearts can hide.
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I will scroll through smiles once shared,
THEY will seem like they once cared.
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I will ache, but still remain,
Not for peace—but strength from pain
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I will stand—not untouched,
But unbroken, still in bloom.
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I will remember, NOT erased—
Only faded, softer now.
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I was love in quiet ink,
I was love THEY could hardly hold.
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And no matter how much I gave—
In the end, I'd be REPLACED.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (13)
This is breath-taking, wow. The final line was like a gut punch. such good writing, well done!
oof, this hits hard, komal. Well done
The ending? It hits harder than a dart! Beautiful poem ❤️💞
Gosh this was so sad but also I love the humility and acceptance too. Really love the line about them wearing smiles with borrowed pasts.
NICE WORK
This hits the feeling me hard. We become yesterdays news so easily
They danced in suns I birthed from night... 😭.... this one hit me deeper. Love this poem. Brilliant! ❤️
A favorite quote of mine " Not everyone will finish your journey with you. We have to learn to let folks off at their stop." So true...
Every line captures the ache of being all-in with someone who couldn’t meet you there. This left me with a sad feeling, which means it was well written!
This has so many poignant lines and it shows the power of our imagination and soulful emotional energy as humans. Great job 👏
Heartbreaking and relatable! Beautifully done, Komal!!
Sad but real. A reminder to accept the fact that people come and go out of your life. Lovely poem. Like the structure of it.
I love it, girl. It's all brilliant but I especially resonate with 'they sought ease, not depth'. ⚡💙⚡