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I’m blurry face

—inspired by Blurry Face by 21 Pilots & losing your muse

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
I’m blurry face
Photo by Elvin Hacaliyev on Unsplash

I’m blurry face I have no cap I don’t have a problem, proper grammar or punctuation but it’s better

I’m the blurry face monster crying over the deep end of the pool, shaking in the shades of grey and raging, violent blue

I can’t see past my own blurry vision without Moon-Milk-eyes

All my voices inside are filled with stale blurry red lines

I’m afraid of the dark as well as the light

How blinding it all feels

I’m hurt but I can’t find the origin of the wound

I’m blurry face and I feel the stinging difference between now and then

Reality tells me that they are actually the same thing

All the blurry wiped away

In a digital form of eyes as large as the moon

Blinking from afar

Lashes like Rings around a planet

Bleeding into my heart like a transplant

Crying, baby, baby, baby

Don’t cry even though it hurts

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Great poem so many lines stuck out. Great work Melissa

  • J. L. Greenabout a year ago

    Now I got the song Blurry Face stuck in my head. Not mad about it though haha well written and poignant.

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    Deeply emotional and raw, with a powerful sense of internal struggle and confusion. Incredibly done, Melissa! 💌🌟

  • Heyyyy, it's your signature moon milk eyes! Loved your poem so much Merly!

  • Ignited Mindsabout a year ago

    Your words capture pain and confusion so beautifully.

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