Rain, rain go away
Andi wants to play
Flew away from home
To go far and roam
Only to find atmospheric river
Has chosen to deliver
Never ending rain
Puddles on the plain
Rivers filling up
I can fill a cup
Drink pure sky water
Maybe see an otter
Thick gray is the sky
All around for the eye
Landscape green
Animals can preen
Absorb the moisture
While I clam up like an oyster
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Comments (14)
This one pours like rainwater! Perfect rhythm to fit the theme ☺
What an imaginative poem. I believe this could a good children's poem.
I wanna see an otter too hehehehehehe. Loved your poem so much!
Never ending rain - yuck! This was so good though!
This was whimsical and cheerful, despite the rain, Andrea!
Beautiful nature poem, I love rain too.
Such a rainy drippy disappointment and I sure can relate to being an oyster. Well written. Thank you
Rhyming moisture! Ambitious.
Oh dear. Is it likely to brighten for you so you can come out of your shell?
Oh, how I loved this. makes me remember when I was young(er) and how I loved to walk in the rain. Old bones don't like that so much now but your poem makes me remember. Thank you for sharing.
Amazing nature piece
Enjoyed your poem! Fun! Thank you!😊💕🥰
Hahah! This is great!
great poem! I especially liked the line, "drink pure sky water" Thanks for sharing!