Charged with Adoration
My loyal heart can never go astray
When you need my compliance, I will obey
The depth of my love, I can't convey
I will recommit to you every day
... but none of it is enough.
I know I can do better.
You teach me.
I learn from you.
*by
______________Bolt⚡
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Comments (16)
Heartfelt and original! :)
You sure know how to love!
I absolutely love the cover image for this beautiful poem. Felt like a confession for how deep love can go for some. Great work!
This is so heartfelt! A love that inspires us to do better is a beautiful love, indeed!
I enjoyed reading this ♦️♦️♦️♦️
This is well written! Amazing 😊✨
Some serious commitment words here. A bolt from the blue.
Gorgeous work Bill! These lovely lines sound like Wedding Vows! 💕
This was so wonderful. Loved your poem!
Really full of passion
Short, sweet, and so full of devotion! Feels like a quiet promise wrapped in sincerity. Love how it flows—simple but powerful! ✨
Share this with you know who. Good job.
Love this poem about true partnership. Great job!
Love it ♦️♦️♦️♦️🌺
lovely
A deep poem...