Hurt
By The Invisible WriterPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Zulmaury Saavedra on Unsplash
The sky fell, every
Time your fists crashed like thunder
Now freedom lights stars
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The Invisible Writer
Life goals - vacation always- work never
Creator of unreadable stories
Writer of bad poetry
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Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH5 days ago in Critique
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Powerful storytelling packed in these 17 syllables.
Brilliant!
Holy crap, that was so emotional!! Wow, stand-out piece :)
well written
Exquisitely stunning, Will! 🥹
fantastic
Wow! Very potent!✅
This literally had a punch to it... cleverly done Will!
Whoaaaa, you packed a punch in so few words! Awesomeeee!
Stunning
Beautiful
Powerful words, Will. Best of luck!
How have you managed to get so much emotion and power into so few words. This is a masterclass.
Omg, Will. This is outstanding. 👏 Well done.
Love it! Anything thunderous gets my attention! ⚡♥️⚡
This feels more important than just a Vocal challenge entry. Stunning work, Will!
Good for her!