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How Much Space Does a Man Need?

My attempt at Bukowski-like social commentary poetry…

By Sandor SzaboPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
How Much Space Does a Man Need?
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I find it interesting that the richer you are the more goddamn space you take up. Palaces swallow acres, while the rest of us rot in the broom closets and cupboards of America. Yachts drag their fat bellies across the water while men claw for a door or a table— rats fighting for a plank in the shipwreck.

Isolated in your one seater limo while the rest of us, cram like beef in six-foot wide tin rectangles, breathing each other’s air, sweat, stench. What happens when one hoards wealth, like a gluttonous dragon?

When gold rots teeth like sugar, poisons a desire for intimacy, for proximity. The richer you are,

the more god. damn. space you take up!

All that money, and the first thing he buys is the right to forget

the rest of us exist.

To sprawl.

To spread out.

To stretch his legs

across the world

and call it business done well.

What gives them the right

to take up

so much

fucking

space.

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About the Creator

Sandor Szabo

I’m looking to find a home for wayward words. I write a little bit of everything from the strange, to the moody, to a little bit haunted. If my work speaks to you, drop me a comment or visit my Linktree

https://linktr.ee/thevirtualquill

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  • Matthew J. Fromm3 months ago

    I find it universally ironic that I read this after seeing an image of the east wing getting demolished…

  • Tim Carmichael3 months ago

    Wow, this packs a serious punch, and it's supposed to. The anger here is palpable and completely earned, and you've channeled it into some really visceral, powerful imagery.

  • "All that money, and the first thing he buys is the right to forget the rest of us exist." Omggg this is so freaking true! Loved your poem!

  • Sam Spinelli3 months ago

    I really appreciate this, accurate observations with a relatable sense of anger.

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