She waltzes in and
Steals the show, all colorful
But yet quite dainty
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All the while quietly
Insinuating herself
With a peaceful flair
Her beauty attracts
Like a heat of desire
Pulsing in the groin
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When her time is through
She boldly gathers about
Her, the gown she wears
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Quietlike she marches
Easing the way for the next
Diva to follow
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They’ll scatter seeds
Aspirations and daydreams
In fertile soil
That will bear the fruit
Belonging to the next Belle
An endless cycle
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Returning yearly
Carrying the promise of warmth
Displaying colors
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In desire’s embrace
Petals waving in the sun
Showing the Queens’ paths
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Comments (12)
Lovely words and structure here!
"killing me softly" with her song..., what I experience at many a performance, just as described here, Mother.
Stunning piece! This felt magical! 💖✨🌟
Love your creations and poetry!💕
Nice Job with Haiku's - Nicely Done!!!
Well-wrought!
Aw very delicate - I don't usually dig the haikui but this is lovely 💜
I really enjoyed this. It felt like watching something meaningful unfold. The use of the haiku flow works beautifully. It gives the whole piece a rhythm.
You always write so beautifully, MC!! You are the poet we need. 💖 The changing of the seasons makes for great haikus, and of course you nailed it.
I agree with Mike. I love your words. The pictures make them even more powerful-- icing on the cake. Don't doubt yourself!!! 💕 ⚡💙⚡
Hahahahahahahahaha pulsing in the groin! Not me thinking of a comically throbbing dick 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
A perfect seasonal poem with beautiful images as well