Hoar Frost and Husky
Frosty Challenge - prose poem
Author Note: One of winter's beauties is the intricate crystals--called hoarfrost--that form on branches, wires, poles, and other things. Hoarfrost could be called a wintertime cousin to summer's dew. It forms when water vapor in the air contacts solid surfaces that are already below freezing point. Immediately on contact, ice crystals form, and the ice continues to grow as more water vapor is frozen. The Arctic frequently has perfect conditions.
A Pose Poem for the Frosted Challenge
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moonbeams are shuttered by glints of dawn that sparkle off iced birch branches as the mercury rises. muffled whispering snaps and crackles murmur over marshmallow-like mounds of snow as crisp ice bursts open in the warming sunshine. frozen conifer needles, shrubs and branches break loose of hoar frost. the small boy opens the door to release his husky-dog in a still-darkened dawn. mama slips next to her kiddiewink, a steaming mug in hand, one knee resting on the mudroom bench, enjoying his rushed preparation for a frosted dawn adventure. the fragrance of her drink reminds him of hot cocoa and cinnamon toast she will have ready when he returns. he licks his bright red lips, pulling on his navy parka and insulated boots. snugging the plaid mossy-green scarf over his nose, mama kisses his cheek, and they laugh at husky, whose nose is pointed skyward, impatiently waiting for his small charge, howling into the brisk wind, then rolling with legs pointed to the white sky. stars of ice float down onto the dog's fur, and he leaps to his feet, ears and tail alert, hearing the door open, then shakes the snow off as his small friend runs to him. mama smiles, dawn light shimmering from her emerald eyes as she gazes through the kitchen's curtainless window, its pane laced in a frame of frost. her boy throws snowballs in the morning light, and the dog leaps and crunches them in an open, laughing grimace. husky has led her sprout away, singing, as huskies do. singing the kiddo out into the clearing, away from the house and trees. his mom gasps as a sheet of ice cascades from the roof, domino shards crashing to earth. hand flies to her throat and she inhales deeply, relieved that the furry guardian kept her child safe. winter morning silence is broken now by drip, drip, drip of melting ice and snow, and foot and pawprints have etched circles and stars and diamonds in the snow, but the sky is heavy gray, and the unstable air will tease between snow and sleet as the ice melts and later refreezes. the toast pops up, ready to be buttered.
Copyright © 11/29/2024 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Comments (19)
Absolutely beautifully written!
I love the lack of capital letters throughout this piece - it gives presence to the cozy feel of this piece. :-)
Beautifully captures the warmth of family, nature's crispness, and the promise of a cozy morning.
Loved it! I kicks the vibe of winter... Looking forward to part 2 of Playground War... You can read my stuff too; and I'd be grateful😊🙌
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This was absolutely delightful. Well Done!!!
Amazing, love how you vividly described the scenery and the action of what everyone was doing. You really captured the winter morning feeling
Wow! This is like a perfect winter morning—crunchy snow, playful dog, cozy vibes, and a warm cup of cocoa waiting after the adventure. I can practically feel the frosty air and the laughter!✨💖
This was absolutely wonderful! I want some of that butter toast hehehehe
Sparkling diamonds in the moonlight of a cold night. Your words remind me if the more beautiful aspects of our winter land here in Alaska
The way you bring all of these elements together is outstanding! This piece was gorgeous! 💌
This is absolutely stunning. Such poetic beauty! I love, love, love the picture, too, which truly compliments the poetry. (I liked it so much, I nearly used this picture on one of my frosty poems).
This is so lovely. Well done.
I could see the landscape of the area, and it gave a cozy feeling all bundled up and taking a walk.
Gorgeous work! I'm a sucker for moonbeams...that first line really pulled me in =')
Oh wow! This really captured my imagination! I love the vivid detail and imagery you used. I felt drawn into the story - almost like opening up the start of a book on a winter day.
This is quite a vivid poetic scene, Andi! It really brings the snow and frosted landscape to life like a treasured memory. Great challenge entry!
Love this, not just because it's got my fave creature in it, but because it is brilliant. Can imagine them playing in the snow.