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By angela hepworthPublished about a year ago 1 min read

when did it all become history to you?

because I don’t quite know

when it happened for me

when did the time pass us by

and leave us breathless and lonely,

with nothing and no one to grasp?

when did your hand, large and firm,

become the only one I could hold?

when did we become inseparable,

and decide we were only good enough

for each other?

when did our fingers intertwine

and never let go?

when did we start to share the same eyes,

the same vision, the same callous view

of this world around us?

when did friends become enemies;

when did enemies become unimportant?

when did people turn into voids

of space, taking up all the room?

where did hope go?

where is love?

when did we become

unable to see it?

FriendshipMental Healthsad poetryFree Verse

About the Creator

angela hepworth

Hello! I’m Angela and I enjoy writing fiction, poetry, reviews, and more. I delve into the dark, the sad, the silly, the sexy, and the stupid. Come check me out!

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  • Testabout a year ago

    I liked the flow, the emotion, and the perception. Well done!

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    The repeated inquiries about time and transformation create a rhythmic urgency. Incredibly done! 💌

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    I guess noticing it has happened is the first step in whatever comes next.

  • This echoed soooo loudly in my empty soul. Loved it so much!

  • Jamye Sharpabout a year ago

    I love the pathos of this poem, and the reflection that even as we grow and develop relationships over time and lose some, there is also sadness in leaving behind the new, the bright, and the first time.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Stunning and I love the picture too.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Poignant pause for relationships, Angela.

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    Urgent questions, all!

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