Good Intentions
A nonet for my first marriage
By Dana CrandellPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Stephen Harlan on Unsplash
They said we were too young to commit
Before long we both proved them right
But one of us was stubborn
"For the kids' sake," I said
And so it went on
Fourteen long years
Love suffered
Withered
Died
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About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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Comments (13)
A moving Nonet, Dana. Nice work! 👍😊
Ugh, the tension in this piece is tangible. I'm so sorry you experienced this, Dana! That is a long, slow "withering". Our human-ness is so complicated. Great piece, my friend! Happy to *see* you here. Looks like you've taken a break, as have I. Totally been missing my faves! :)
Ah, this feels like a long conversation.
Withered is such a good word choice 😁
Ugh, that is a story told too often, and I'm sorry that it was yours back then. You wrote it wonderfully though :) Glad to see your face on here, big bro
Very sad when this happen two lovers
Ouch, I'm sorry it had to end but what is love without heartbreak? Very well articulated Dana!! I haven't seen much of you on here lately, are you working on any background projects are you still settling into your new house?
Gosh, I would have probably taken the kids and run away...but I am bad. Wow, I hope all is well now and you all are friends, for the sake of the children. The roads of life, navigating is hard.
oh, the feels at play here: the live and learn" experiences. Great job, Dana
So sorry you experienced this 🥺 Loved your Nonet!
Oh arghh. 14 years - great nonet for the challenge!
Very raw and well written. Excellent nonet, Dana.
Well done, my friend.