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Going Down To The River

A Butterfly Cinquain third new entry into the Vocal "Get Comfortable" Challenge

By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred Published 3 years ago 1 min read

This is my third new entry into the Vocal "Get Comfortable" Challenge

Today my Muse, her daughter and a friend have gone down to the river for a day of total relaxation, and I told her that “River Girls” would be a great poem to write, then I realised it was a bit close to “Green River Girls” that I wrote for her and her daughter, so I thought maybe a butterfly cinquain would be a beautiful way to celebrate a relaxing day for mom and Autumn and Autumn’s friend. This is just a little comfort poetry inspired by my Muse.

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Let’s Go

To The River

Mom, Autumn and her Friend

Spend Time Dipping In Cool Water

And Then

Enjoy A Picnic and Coffee

And Cuddles Together

Perfect Comfort

For All

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I Love

Dipping My Toes

In The Cooling Water

And Know My River Girls Do Too

Comfort

Is What We All Feel When We Are Here

Just Perfect Warmth For Us

With So Much Love

For Us

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    Awww this was so wonderful! I loved it!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Sweet and comforting!!!😊💖💕

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Reads like sunshine! 🌻🌷🦋🌺☀️🌝🌞

  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    Personal experiences make great stories. Keep writing from your heart. They are the best ones.

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Very nice one. Well done

  • Beautiful visual... Nicely written.

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