Going Down To The River
A Butterfly Cinquain third new entry into the Vocal "Get Comfortable" Challenge

This is my third new entry into the Vocal "Get Comfortable" Challenge
Today my Muse, her daughter and a friend have gone down to the river for a day of total relaxation, and I told her that “River Girls” would be a great poem to write, then I realised it was a bit close to “Green River Girls” that I wrote for her and her daughter, so I thought maybe a butterfly cinquain would be a beautiful way to celebrate a relaxing day for mom and Autumn and Autumn’s friend. This is just a little comfort poetry inspired by my Muse.
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Let’s Go
To The River
Mom, Autumn and her Friend
Spend Time Dipping In Cool Water
And Then
Enjoy A Picnic and Coffee
And Cuddles Together
Perfect Comfort
For All
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I Love
Dipping My Toes
In The Cooling Water
And Know My River Girls Do Too
Comfort
Is What We All Feel When We Are Here
Just Perfect Warmth For Us
With So Much Love
For Us
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Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred
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Comments (6)
Awww this was so wonderful! I loved it!
Sweet and comforting!!!😊💖💕
Reads like sunshine! 🌻🌷🦋🌺☀️🌝🌞
Personal experiences make great stories. Keep writing from your heart. They are the best ones.
Very nice one. Well done
Beautiful visual... Nicely written.
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