lost in familiar
Eyes, then, “Can I keep you?” He
Ghosts my lips in blue.
About the Creator
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
View more
Add your insightsExpert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme



Comments (3)
So beautiful, Merly!
Sweet!!!
Ahh!! I loved this scene so much!! So awesome that you made this into a sweet haiku :) Made me smile