Garden
Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 6

There's a garden,
gated,
out back of my mind,
where bees delicately hum,
amongst dreams that grow
in vines of honeysuckle;
sweet,
delicate,
stretching towards the sun.
love blooms wild here;
dressed as daisies and dandelions,
twinkling;
sparks of starlight,
against blankets of emerald green.
Memories glint off of asters;
purple petals turned prismatic lenses,
sending messages,
of tender,
loving,
moments,
in morse code,
from amongst the sawgrass.
I walk here often,
amongst unpaved paths,
sun-warm earth kissing my feet;
picking bouquets of poppies,
cardinal flowers,
and yarrow,
until my arms overflow with joy,
full to the brim with fragrance,
that remembers,
the name the moon gave me.
And the cosmos smile
whispering in the passing breeze
"you too were made
to bloom unburdened,
with petals pointing skyward."
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Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb
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Comments (15)
My day 6 challenge, thank you! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/bride-of-the-bitter-root%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Loved, "sending messages, of tender, loving, moments, in morse code, from amongst the sawgrass" Beautifully done!
his is a breathtakingly beautiful poem, a lush oasis of hope and self-love
Here’s my garden poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/amble-with-me%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here’s my entry for Garden: https://shopping-feedback.today/stories/garden-cmaxu07km%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
You make that garden sound beautiful and special. 💕
Best! I love it!
Here is my entry: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/garden-r6kgr0rrv%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Beautiful love how you described it so elegantly and the imagery it created.
Well-wrought!
Well, that was just sublime.
Mine for today: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/garden-m7j780rjo%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Superb work
Marie381Uk (You) less than a minute ago So beautiful, every word takes me to a world of loving dreams♦️♦️♦️♦️
A delightfully whimsical poem… sweet ending: “ And the cosmos smile whispering in the passing breeze "you too were made to bloom unburdened, with petals pointing skyward." My Mum grew Cosmos… nice to find them in your poem.😊