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Garden

Ellie Hoovs’ Wonderland Poetry Challenge Day 6

By L.I.EPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
Garden
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Dancing in my garden

Full of fruits

Next to the fruit of love, my heart beat free

Then I twirl into the fruit of peace, where I close my eyes and take in the breeze

Next I turn into the joy fruit, with my hands in the air

Take a small bite of it and I’m filled with giggles

But then I stumbled on a few weeds

Dear gardener take out the weeds please

The fear weeds

The self-doubt weed

The sadness weed

It make my garden ugly

And killing all my nice fruit

Pluck.

Pluck.

Pluck.

Yes! Its back beautiful!

Nice and green, with bright red love fruits

White peace fruits and yellow joy fruits

All in abundance!

Enough to share with others!

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A/N: Join the challenge! Reading others as well.

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L.I.E

Hey, I'm Emily! Thanks for reading. Hope you read something that inspires you. Or something that you find relatable.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶8 months ago

    A clever poem celebrating spiritual fruit and weeding out temptations and negativity.✅

  • Alyssa Musso8 months ago

    What a lovely poem! I love the imagery of the garden and plucking out those weeds!

  • Beautiful, thankyou for sharing xx

  • Ellie Hoovs9 months ago

    I love that this ends with having enough to share with others. Beautiful!

  • Oooo, I want the bright red love fruits. But substitute love with blood, lol. Loved your poem!

  • Rachel Deeming9 months ago

    I loved the playfulness of this but also the serious message - that these insecurities can be plucked out, leaving the good stuff to ripen. Nice!

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Awesome!!!

  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    Beautiful poem ♦️♦️♦️

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