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Frosted Memories

Tankas on Loss

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Frosted Memories
Photo by Brigitta Schneiter on Unsplash

This is for Mikeydred’s December Prompt

Love seems faint, but never leaves.

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Frosted glass mirrors

Empty halls and wilted wreaths

A carol sounds near

His song, soft as snow that drifts

She opens the door, shivering

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Candlelight glows dim,

No footprints on frost’s white crust

 A scarf on his chair 

The one she buried with him

Love seems faint, but never leaves.

inspirational

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    This was absolutely beautiful! Such a wonderful poem!

  • Rasma Raistersabout a year ago

    So poignant and beautiful, I know those overwhelming feeling so well,

  • Henrik Hagelandabout a year ago

    The feeling of hearing his voice, calling my name, asking for something comes to my mind reading your poem. I know the emptiness when realizing that he is not there. Beautifully written Michelle, thank you.

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