After long hours of wandering,
And climbing up that hill,
And perplexed wondering:
Whose will am I trying to fulfill?
What was Sisyphus thinking
While dragging a boulder on his shoulders?
My wishful sinking,
And wistful drinking.
It's getting colder.
I lost the thread
I am afraid. But don't get mad,
I'll start again.
After climbing up that hill,
Fulfilling my will,
Getting to know the real
Beauty of the sunset
Which I, of course, had already met
On numerous occasions before,
But under different circumstances; therefore
I climbed that hill.
I saw a pub—that's what will heal
My weary body. And as I read, black on white:
Free beer,
I sneer at my recent doubts.
I put all of the regrets aside.
Yes, I knew with all my guts,
I came here for a reason.
I prowl closer,
And closer. And read once more...
What a... treason!
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"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl5 days ago in Fiction
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Such a well written poem Andrei! I really didn't know what to expect from the poem when I opened it, but it took me on a whole journey and the twist in the end was the cherry on top. Well done!
Haha oh man, I really felt for this character. I wanted them to get that free beer, what a sucker punch at the end, but really funny. So well written, took me on a little journey there!
Super cool.
Andrei, this is so well written! I can't believe the audacity of that shop owner!!! This story made me smile though, thanks for that!
I thought I had said this already, but congrats on this getting Top Story!
Great imagery, love the combo or existential dread with some witty humor!
False advertising! Congrats on a Top Story. 🎉
Where’s the armed security? 🤣😎 Good read! Congrats 🥇🥇
Oh now that's just mean!
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Great work ✍🏼👏!
i like it !
Ooooh what a troll I love that.
Congratulations on your Top Story🎉💯✨
Haha! Great poem! You should send it their way! Maybe next time you’ll actually get a free 🍺 😂! Congrats on top story!
Damn funny! I knew a group that had the same name. So many disappointed faces... 😉🍺
That was incredibly clever! Well done and congratulations!
Wonderful Poem!!! Well done nice work...
Aahhh, that ending. Well done and congrats on the TS
Outstanding
Insane how the poem was inspired by this sign! Shows inspirations comes from anywhere! And I love the ending 🤣🤣.. the disappointment at the deceitful sign
🤣🤣. What a tease!
This is one good piece
Lured is the word that comes to mind - good job!
loved this and the end was gold!