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Set the wheels in motion
You cry an ocean
I reap the commotion
Of my unsettled mind
We stay on the grind
He drinks a love potion
She scorns the mankind
They lack any notion
Of what's left behind
You keep hiding your pride
I veil my emotions
They paraglide
High up in the sky
Goodbye
About the Creator
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (7)
My favorite thing about this one is the rhythm. It fits the song beautifully, too, as Mariann noted. And wow, what a song to pick; I'm full of anxiety now! "You keep hiding your pride I veil my emotions They paraglide High up in the sky" Wow. Love this metaphor soooo much! ❤️
Lovely!!!💖💖💕
This flows like a song. Well done.
I love how the music match your poem so perfectly 🥰
Nice piece❤️❗
Great words, love the image and the music too
This is tender and thoughtful. Beautifully written.