Forecast Says Rain
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Rain
Drenched
My Clothes,
Spirit
And my
Mind.
Heavy,
Soggy
And
Depressed...
Those Are the words
I used to describe...
My Emotions Dripping away
My Pride.
Mourning for Sunshine
To Dry up my wet Dignity...
Within this time I can not see the world withclear eyesight.
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The Rain Hurts My Eyes.
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βWhy can't I Run, or maybe find a place to hide?β
I heard the only way to escape the precipitation:
You have to
Go Through
The Rain
In order to
Come out!
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Comments (22)
"Mourning for Sunshine" Beautiful and so clever it almost makes the heart break! You've got some serious word magic flying around in your head Lonzo!
Oh wow, such great use of words to evoke such imagery!
Your poems always wax philosophical and deep. Wonderfully done,
Inspiring and real! Well done!
I feel like you have followed me around to gather that information. This is so real
just beautiful!
This was so deep and emotional. Very beautifully written!
I can really feel this one. ππ
Eloquently written & steeped in truth! Fantastic work Zo!
So beautiful. Captivating piece, especially 'The rainfall Hurts my Eyes'. Very nice.
very expressive
I can feel the raw emotions you are expressing in this piece, relatable and heartbreaking! Thanks for baring a piece of your soul onto this page!
Wonderful!!! Loving it!!!πππ
Beautifully deep and emotional. Love! β€οΈ
beautiful and melancholic. Well done.
Nice imagery to express feelings
Well done, been there . πGreat used of words to create that emotional feeling π
Nice! Beautiful.
Beautiful poem... Well written!!!
Very beautiful and today -- I needed that one. The only way out is through.
Perfectly expressed, Lonzo. I love your poetry ππ
The poem captures the feeling of being weighed down by emotions in a beautifully descriptive way.πππ§‘