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For Jean Passerat, inventor of the villanelle

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By Tim CarmichaelPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Portrait of Jean Passerat (1534-1602) the man who wrote the first Villanelle poem.

In ruffled collar, turned against the light,

A poet gazes toward what lies beyond,

The man who gave the villanelle its flight.

He fixed the form with meter drawn up tight,

Nineteen lines circling like a sacred round,

In ruffled collar, turned against the light.

What visions did Passerat's quill ignite?

What repetitions did his mind compound,

The man who gave the villanelle its flight?

His profile speaks of intellect and sight,

Of Renaissance minds where art and learning crowned,

In ruffled collar, turned against the light.

He forged the chains that paradoxically write

Freedom through constraint, where sense is bound.

The man who gave the villanelle its flight.

Centuries later, still his gift burns bright.

The turning verse, the echo's haunting sound,

In ruffled collar, turned against the light,

The man who gave the villanelle its flight.

Authors Note: Jean Passerat (1534–1602) was a French poet and scholar of the Renaissance, known for his graceful lyric verse and wit. A professor of Latin at the Collège de France, he also wrote political satires and songs. His poem “Villanelle (J’ai perdu ma tourterelle)” is his most famous work, a tender elegy that later inspired the fixed poetic form now called the villanelle. Though Passerat wrote only this single example, its musical repetition and emotional depth made it a model for poets centuries later.

Villanelle

(Jean Passerat, 16th century)

I have lost my turtledove:

Is it not she whom I hear?

I will go after her.

You mourn your faithful love;

Alas, so do I mourn mine:

I have lost my turtledove.

If your love is still true,

So too is my faith steadfast:

I will go after her.

Your lament renews itself;

I too must ever mourn:

I have lost my turtledove.

Since I no longer see the fair one,

Nothing beautiful remains to me:

I will go after her.

Death, whom I so often call,

Take now what is offered thee:

I have lost my turtledove,

I will go after her.

Villanelle

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Raymond G. Taylor3 months ago

    Wow that’s a masterful Villanelle. Great bit of history too.

  • Fela Baugh3 months ago

    I really love the lines you chose to refrain. Everything came together so perfectly! A great idea to honor him. And his poem is just gorgeous. It feels like a rallying call.

  • Sean A.3 months ago

    Awesome! Loved learning and getting a great villanelle at the same time

  • Caitlin Charlton3 months ago

    Oooh you're talking about his attire. 🎶Lovely to know what he might've been thinking. The nose looks like a place where the words could climb... 🎶The metre was definitely drawn up tight. Oooo I love how the repeat words circle back around and their meanings drill further into the mind. The magic of the villanelle. 🎶I love how you describe him here, ' his profile speaks of intellect and sight'. Now all hail Jean passerat for his masterpiece, an example for all to follow, with the villanelle. 🎶Your poem was absolutely fantastic 🤗❤️🖤

  • D. J. Reddall3 months ago

    An artful tribute to the progenitor of the poetic form the tribute takes!

  • Darla M Seely3 months ago

    Nice, Tim, will you please read my poems???

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