It’s only once every once in a while I think of you these days.
It’s only days that stretch for weeks, when my mind falls in this haze.
This haze that lasts for months on end, till years cry for more time.
But time stands still while life floats by and leaves the past behind.
*
It’s only every other moment, the ones lost in between.
It’s only every red and blue, yellow, pink, and green.
It’s just the breath blown in the wind that brings tears to my eyes,
And the time it takes each drop to fall as rain pours from the skies.
*
It’s only once a season, then again all season long.
It’s just the winter evenings, and summer days that go on and on.
It’s only in the autumn, when the leaves fall from the trees,
And in the sound of robin’s song floating on a cool spring breeze.
*
So, if you thought I spent my days with you always on my mind,
If you thought my heart searched through our past, its life-beat for to find.
If the image of me still wanting you causes you to smile,
I’m sorry, but I rarely think of you - just every once in a while.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (39)
Your poems are always flawless. Whatever beat you aim for, you hit it every time.
Sorry only just getting here.. lets get the formalities out the way -congrats on Top Story and leaderboard placement! now, this was so relatable and universal to the experience of grief! Like Rommi, I was impressed with how you balanced that deep ache of loss with whimsy and humour! just elevated it and gave it a real autheticity! among your best, Cathy, and why I admire and take a lot of inspiration from you! you always set the bar so very high!
Well-wrought! This hits rhe perfect pitch between whimsical humor and deep, heartfelt sentiment. I don't mind admitting that the big silly man wiped a tear from his eye.
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Back again! 🎉 Congrats on your Top Story! 📰✨ Super proud of you—so well deserved! 💪👏 Keep shining! 🌟😊
Congrats on making my top 10 read list for March ! https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/march-top-10-reads-list-for-vocal%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E, loved this writing. Keep it up!
So beautiful it aches every time
Woo hoo Cathy!! Congrats on second most discussed story this week!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Love the play of words capturing time in so many ways- congrats on top story, very well deserved!
Back to say congratulations
reading this and thinking of my ex...
Very romantic. All-consuming thoughts, but denial.
Bravo, my friend!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!
Very well expressed, my friend. And that last line got me 😌. Congrats, Cathy!!!
Heart-touching and beautifully written, Cathy. This feels like it should be a song. Congratulations on your top story!
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You turned the leaf of always to reveal the lie of seldom deftly herein, Cathy!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Beautiful work and congrats on your well deserved top story!!
Very well written, congrats 👏
this reminded me of a Leonard Cohen poem . Lovely.
Not surprised the Vocal Top Story selectors snatched this up quick! Beautifully sad and wonderfully witty all at once! Fantastic poem, Cathy!
Achingly & tellingly expressed, Cathy. Congrats on your Top Story.
Woohoo Cathy!! Congrats on a quick Top Story!!