End Times for All Last Nerves
It will feel way worse than it sounds
A flood of sensory input disorients
for silent seconds
This melange of aromas
gratifications with top tier body function
in a life spiral end point for first place
Easy wins over awareness
which stretches and yawns one morning
to find every goddamn piece of furniture rearranged
Protests futile
Fingers at recalcitrant angles
Thyroid imbalance that requires px* meds 3 x a day
and digestive system on a toned down menu selection
Choice profanities outdated
Sounds inane
SOPs** fight back via cumulative data
and handwritten receipts
faded travel itineraries
and three cars they don't even make anymore
let alone service
Hey…remind them
knees that creak retain adequate motor function
to still kick hard
Go on
Let ‘em be a smart ass
I'll chuck back well-meaning assumptions directed my way
with whatever finger flicks up the highest
Forward motion
remains forward motion irrespective of speed
Make
People
Wait
Teach lessons
Correlate what all-consuming reach
for pre-programmed societal accolades at breakneck speed
does to a body over time
Conduct a three-hour final exam at the end
Laugh like hell
behind the book you can't read
without your bifocals
In times past
I might have said
Hold fire
Bide your time
But now the world overflows full of flippin' nonsense
The hourglass empty
No witnesses necessary
Only a season of retribution
that'll be done when it's done
*px – prescription
**SOPs – Standard Operating Procedures
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Quite often, my poetic ramblings are just that...ramblings. Thank you for having the time on your hands to read them. I appreciate your support!
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Comments (17)
"Totally agree!"
I love this. As always, hard to pick a stand out line, though, #because they're all outstanding#
Fabulous sorry I can only comment. I tried to like this too but when I press heart nothing happens
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A body falling apart is the biggest fear for me.
Finger flicks up highest🤣🤣🤣 SOPS- don’t miss ‘em. Good job, loved it!
So much organised chaos, i love it!
Relatable ramblings!!! Congratulations on Top Story too!!!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
interesting , i never saw such a deep meaning poem
Wow, this was incredible! I loved the formatting and how emotional and hard-hitting this poem was. And what a powerhouse of a title, my god. Congratulations on making TS!! ♥️♥️
Congrats on the Top Story! I always love the emotion you pour into your work. It makes it so strong! Loved this!!
🎉 Congrats on your Top Story! 📰✨ Super proud of you—so well deserved! 💪👏 Keep shining! 🌟😊
Oooo, learned so many new words from you today. Your poem was so profound. I loved it!
Pretty much like most of my thought processes these days. Entertainingly regaled, Dani.
Wow, this poem is a whirlwind of raw emotion and wit!
I can relate. Sending prayers and good vibes your way 🙏🏼