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Elastic Souls

Senryu

By Lamar WigginsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Elastic Souls
Photo by Andres Siimon on Unsplash

how far can you stretch

before tension liberates?

rebounding anew

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Written for the Matthew Fromm' 'Mundane object' Challenge... details below.

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Lamar Wiggins

Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.

"Life is Love Experienced" -LW

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  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Fabulous!!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    So clever, well done!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Ooh, I like this one!

  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    Now THAT'S a question!

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    Oh snap! Loved it!!

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Very nice! A deep layer beneath a simple subject!

  • Hayley Matto2 years ago

    Got me smirking with this one Lamar, super clever!

  • Oooo, this was so deep! Loved your Senryu!

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    Ah, so philosophical, and coming from a truly mundane object! Great take on the challenge, Lamar!

  • Heather Zieffle 2 years ago

    Great poem for this challenge Lamar!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    This is very insightful, Lamar. This is the second Senryu I have read today from the mundane object challenge that made me think! How much is too much? Sometimes we let circumstances or others pull us to the breaking point before the pressure forces us to quit or withdraw or reassess. Only then can we bonce back and start again!

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    I like how you used elastic to measure how much a person can take to bounce back

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Good grief...There is a Mundane objects challenge. I like it. That question above is a very good one. Tension is setting in now from hopping al over, reading stories. Time to relax. Gone to think on it.

  • Deep! Excellent work, Lamar!!!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Loved the double meaning, so well done! And you had me right away at the title :)

  • D. J. Reddall2 years ago

    Artfully executed! I used to resent the mandatory brevity of the haiku and related forms; I now recognize how purely they distill meaning, as this senryu does!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!! Loving it!!!💕❤️❤️

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