Echos of Pain
A Poetic Journey Through Pain and Resilience
It stays deep in the silence of the evening.
a whispered shadow where the heartbeats weep.
Sounds of loss, a constant rain,
Through veins, the essence of suffering.
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A wordless cry in the profound blackness leaves a scorching sharp mark.
Tears invisible in the hug of the eyes,
a secret grief carved on the face.
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It covers the soul like a gray cloak, transforming brilliant dawn into a tired day.
Every stride onward, a hefty pull across the bog where spirits sink.
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Dreams once vivid now fell from a thorny crown; memories distorted.
Every heartbeat brings a pulsating agony,
a flimsy smile, a try at imitation.
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Still, a flutter of what might be exists in the depths of this unbounded sea.
a strength developed on the flame of the furnace,
a strong heart not fixed in nature.
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For pain, although terrible, can also shape,
a soul to be courageous, a heart to be strong.
Following that, a fresh dawn might blossom.
Via worn-out eyes and tear-stained cheeks.
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Thus, knowing its path is not without grace; we offer quiet welcome to grief.
For in our darkness we discover our brightness.
evidence of relentless struggle.
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