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Dust to Dust

and everything in between.

By Cathy holmesPublished 3 years ago β€’ Updated 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Photo by Mika Baumeist on Unsplash

It seems every day

I sweep dust from the table

straight into my bones

performance poetry

About the Creator

Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • RP2 years ago

    I absolutely love this. Makes me feel like I should dust more often 🀣

  • Gerald Holmes2 years ago

    excellent

  • excellent haiku

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Excellent and just a little chilling as well!

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    Home run!!! Loved it. 🍻

  • J. S. Wade3 years ago

    Love the analogy! Deep ! πŸ₯°

  • So good.

  • mokradi_ 3 years ago

    Amazing

  • Ooh, I feel that. Well done!

  • Whoaaa, this was soooo deep! Loved it!

  • Holly Pheni3 years ago

    Deep. Love it.

  • Cheryl E Preston3 years ago

    Love this

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Wow, Cathy! Awesome!

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Yes I feel this one ☺️

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    Ah, but whose bones made the dust? ;) Great job, Cathy!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Awesome!!!πŸ’–πŸ’•πŸ˜Š

  • Moe Radosevich3 years ago

    Very nice, maybe I need some in my bones πŸ˜€

  • Lori Melton3 years ago

    You amaze me lady!! Wow!

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    Wowwww. This one is a winner, Cathy!!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Freaking fantastic!! I bow before you, haiku queen. Loved it!!

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Nice 😊 dust never ends

  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    Oh woah! That twist! You truly are a master of the haiku!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Omg 😳 The way you said this is stunning! Excellent work!

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