Dreams of the Acorn-Child
A love poem.

I fell to you a fettered acorn-child
Not seeing the ambition held under
my scalloped acorn-crown.
I bounced upon your fecund ground.
Coming to rest upon
a prescient fallen branch,
I smelled your water scent
breathed in your sunfire glow
Drawn into your soil's soft ovation,
your constriction freed and filled me,
flourishing a vision
in the pliant mind of the acorn-child.
Dreams of oaken dendrites daring indigo skies.
This divination bursts the callow crown
exploding it into snapshot constellations
and in the softest summer dusk,
unveils the unmade histories.
Tiny, everyday miracles wink and
flutter among our leaf legions,
shimmering the silver-green canopy.
Reflecting our sunshine into abundance
and letting us secret some sunlight away
for when the days are darkened.
*****
You coiled and spiraled our branches
spinning my compass so that I missed
the empty days that fill so many.
Your lucent synthesis lifting me.
We sang out our love song's only lyric,
and danced through the mystic alchemies
that fold us upon each other
over and again
over and again
until our innate fruits form and we rejoice.
Your laughter tickles the leaves and they flutter,
feeding our thready roots, and proclaiming
the solstice wind slipping through
our simple twilights.
*****
You let me go dormant in
winters of wishful deception so that I
combust and burn green velvet fires
when the time comes to melt
through the requisite cold work.
*****
We turn our faces upward to supplicant warmth.
I see the breeze carry your pure solutions
through our brazen branches
shaking loose the practiced philosophies
foist upon us by souls that dangle,
held only by the abating stems
of burnt-brown leaves
and unquestioned awe.
Watch them detach, and tumbledown thud
to commence their deconstruction.
They fail to cleave us from the comfort
of our saving and cracking bark.
We sleep among treetops. Our branches and roots
beautifully bound in happy convolutions that
no strife or squall can put asunder.
*****
So we wait and wither and yield
to the world who depends on us
feeds on us
loves us.
Until that crowning fall and crash
resolves itself in a cushioned thump
our love-gift to a fertile, incessant forest
that nods and returns to its
endless moil and toil.
While we lay in our leafy bed,
entwined in eternity.
About the Creator
John R. Godwin
Sifting daily through the clutter of my mind trying to create something beautiful.
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"So we wait and wither and yield...Until that crowning fall and crash," were words that stopped me in my tracks. Congratulations on making the leaderboard John!
What a stunning poem. "Dreams of oaken dendrites daring indigo skies" and other subliminal alliteration drew me with every word capturing my rapt attention until the very end. This poem is sublime. Well done. Congratulations, too, on placing as a Runner Up in the challenge.
Wow, John, the only word to describe this poem is stunning; I am in awe right now. This part felt extra special to me: "You coiled and spiraled our branches spinning my compass so that I missed the empty days that fill so many. Your lucent synthesis lifting me." Congratulations on your win! 💙👏
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Absolutely lovely. You use nature imagery in a very lyrical, descriptive way. It's almost as though I'm there.
Lovely words
I'm truly humbled by the gorgeous writing in this. Beautifully done!
THIS is what language is supposed to do. Oh, the consonance, the assonance, those long open vowels--I'm in linguistic heaven reading this, and the imagery is captivating. Good luck in the challenge; this one is pure gold.
Gosh this was so beautiful! Loved this so much!
Absolutely gorgeous imagery. I loved every line.