The Ballad of a Pinecone
A forest poem
Do not mistake a forest for a place of peace.
It is a microcosm of the tenacity and aggression of life,
an arms race of leaves and stems in a conquest for sunlight,
balanced only by those species willing to subvert the system,
those that are able to thrive in the shade or bloom in the twilight.
If you ask a moonflower if she misses the sun,
she will turn her cheek and smile at her burn scars.
No, she would much rather go back to blooming in the quieter hours,
safe from the morning glories
who would throttle their neighbour for a five minute headstart on dawn.
The twilight is a lovely time of day.
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Author's note: A snippet that didn't make the cut for a story I'm working on for the Whispering Woods challenge but still thought might be worth sharing with the world.
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Call Me Les
Aspiring etymologist and hopeless addict of children's fiction.
If I can't liberally overuse adverbs and alliteration, I'm out!
Website: lesleyleatherdale.ca
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Comments (36)
So visual and wonderfully penned One of your best in my humble opinion Love these lines: ‘ If you ask a moonflower if she misses the sun, she will turn her cheek and smile at her burn scars.’
It may have been cut but it went on to have a life of it's own.
Great- just seeing this for the first time, glad it got put back into the queue.
Sam is right. Flawless Les. This is stirring but not off-putting towards visiting mighty forests and woodlands. If anything for enchanting because of the way you describe it. Well done belatedly on the Top Story this got.
An intriguing perspective. I like!
Beautiful poetry. This is actually flawless, as far as I can tell.
I agree with the last line for sure
Lucious writing, indeed. Loved it! Congratulations on Top Story.
I love this, there's such vigorous reality, but somehow it doesn't feel aggressive to read, I still want to go there.
Loved reading this Les, and it’s a unique take on the idea of what we call “Mother” Nature. Some great imagery in this poem, like “an arms race of leaves and stems in a conquest for sunlight”. The contrast of frenetic daylight and quiet twilight at the end is clever too🙂
I love the imagery of this forest vegetation battling for survival. Thanks for sharing.
I'm so glad you chose to share this snippet! I can't wait to see what you come up with for the challenge.
Loved this! Especially the third line "an arms race of leaves and stems in a conquest for sunlight." Such a beautiful metaphor. Congrats on a well deserved top story :)
Wonderful writing as always, Les. I have so missed your voice. Congrats on the Top Story.
Love this poem!
So true of the morning glories - you captured it well!
Congrats on your Top Story. This is beautifully written.
I agree with Manisha and Lindsay, The moonflower lines are an amazing triumph! And the whole poem is so well done!
The line about the moonflower - amazing!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This echoes all the live events that go on in a forest that we don't see. I think it has been creatively crafted and would have been a well-deserved challenge win. Never-the-less, it was worth reading.
I love your idea about a forest! Congrats on Top Story!
I cannot wait to read your entry into the challenge. If it is anything like this little ‘snippet’ it has to be good Congratulations
Wow! Thank you everyone. I really wasn't expecting a top story out of this snippet or that so many people would enjoy it so much. Ultimately my entry piece has gone a much less dark direction. Thank you for the encouragement so much. Maybe if I have time I'll make a second entry.
Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳