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Don't wait till the end...

Ask me in December, Babs' unofficial Challenge

By Anna Published 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024
Painting: google.com

Ask me in December,

when the trees lose their green,

the birds fly far away,

and the forests fall asleep.

Ask me, when no one's around

on the snowy street,

where memories are found

and new ones are made.

Ask me if I have faith...

Look! Just stop for a moment,

admire the majestic sunset,

dance and laugh,

be young once again.

don't be afraid

of showing your real self

because that's you

when you smile,

when you cry,

when you say that you're fine

but you're broken inside

and I know that you lie

I don't want you to hide,

just talk to me, alright?

Ask me if we have time,

I'll say "yes, we do,

and we deserve to have"

and you know what?

Ask me now!

Don't wait till the end,

don't look for snow or cold

or any of that,

don't ask others,

ask me, a friend...

Written for Babs' unofficial Ask me in December challenge:

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Anna

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TS count: 11

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  • Denise E Lindquist2 years ago

    Congratulations on your well-deserved top story!πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • Patrick M. Ohana2 years ago

    Congrats on your top story!

  • Congratulations on your top story. ❀️

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Beautiful. Congrats.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Anna, Tip! I am Honoring C. Rommial Butler's request!!!

  • Gloria Penelope2 years ago

    Congratulations on top story!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Awesome work, Anna! Congrats on your top story!

  • Isabella Rose2 years ago

    The most important thing you can provide is safety. It's on that basis that friendships grow. Impressive writing.

  • Back to say congratulations for top story!! <3

  • Very good

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    You've created a real sense of safety with the speaker here.

  • Congratulations on your top story. I love your story

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    I loved your poem. Congratulations on TS!πŸ’•

  • Caroline Craven2 years ago

    Beautiful Anna. Fantastic top story!

  • Kodah2 years ago

    Congrats on top story!!πŸ’ŒπŸ₯³πŸŽ‰πŸ₯³πŸŽ‰

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Anh D Le2 years ago

    Nicely

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    Congratulations on Top Story! So excited for you, Anna! πŸ₯³ πŸ‘πŸ»

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    I love this. I'm so blessed that I have two wonderful friends who care more that I ever thought they would. congratulations on TS.

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    This is wonderful, Anna! Such care for someone dear in a time of pain captured in such Beautiful lines that flowed so effortlessly

  • Colleen Walters2 years ago

    Oh wow. Just wow. The ministry of presence- β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’―

  • John Cox2 years ago

    This is both a wonderful poem as well as a reminder of what it means to be a true friend. Great work, Anna!

  • Well-wrought!

  • Sean Elliott2 years ago

    Beautiful piece! It feels like too often we don't realize how much our loved ones might be suffering until it is too late (in this case, until it's already December)

  • I love this!!! It's sweet how it ends in asking a friend!!! Excellent work Anna!!!

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