What doing may do to me,
Is something thought cannot reveal.
A deal of giving for the right to be,
And the spirit to want to feel.
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A concept so recognized and known,
Yet undone when it comes to doing.
Yet, never will results be shown,
Unless the heart creates a brewing.
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For worlds go on like never-ending,
Regardless of the receivers receiving.
And love and hate forever sending,
Though hearts and minds may be leaving.
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Lucky is the soul, awoken,
To life before it withers away.
And work be done complete or broken,
For only passion can build a day.
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This is a cool, deep look at how action and feeling go hand in hand! Love the way you tie passion into making things happen. It’s a great reminder that doing with heart makes the journey worth it!✨
great work! love these piece
This was stunning. Agree that you need passion to do something.