
Demons won’t let me sleep
Every night I close my eyes,
the demons say, “Open them,”
taking me by surprise.
They bring out all the old crap
locked away that all about you.
Before I know it, I am wide awake,
crying like I always do.
How can one man be so wicked,
hurt with fists and wicked tongue?
Why was I with you 14 years?
Now I play thoughts,
like an old record a song.
I sing; old love songs,
then tears start to flow.
I am drowning in my own thoughts.
You died you took the easy way out,
Leaving me with lap records
and tears drowning all my thoughts.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Very sad. 🤗🤗🤗 hugs to you