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Dead Man Talking

dead man walking

By BrenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

they asked me right there and then

what am i really good at

(you don't wanna know i thought to myself on an undetectable wavelength i had stored away in my mind for an occasion such as this)

so i told them in no uncertain terms

(..this'll be good)

i told them

like they'd never

been told before

i like to whine

i like to moan

i like to grouse

i like to groan

i like to sook

i like to puss

i like to completely fuckin woos

i like to cry

i like to whinge

im a twat

i'm a minge

i can be your little witch

i can be your little snitch

i can be your little rat

i can be your little bitch

i could be a fucking fink

i could be a fuckin stoolie

i could be a witness for the other fucking team

i like to lie i like to steal

i will sour every single deal

make it

i’ll break it

take it

i’ll fake it

i live a lie

in my eye

maybe...

maybe...

this is oversharing

this

this husk

this shell

this life

this hell

social commentarysurreal poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    Oh God, I too would feel like I'm oversharing! This was awesome!

  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    What i wanna know is... who gave you less than an Outstanding for this? c n u t 😂

  • Rob Angeli3 years ago

    Very good. Hits hard.

  • Wow. Dr Seuss meets Sigmund Freud. Awesome my Australian friend… Next time…, a smidge fewer days up bush. I think it … affected you. 🤣😇🤣

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