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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
DATE ❤️
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Let me know when

You bracket Confidence...

I desire to date,

The mature version of you-

Tell me about your experience.

Vitalities happened,

To my Innocents...

You Know That

I Want you currently,

Regardless,

The processing...

It Could be strange,

And it

Could get difficult.

Love is Love.

Flaws with,

The good,

Qualitative endeavors

Produce

Happiness.

Why live in a rush to date,

When you should exist

Taking your

Time to

Learn?

Let's wait awhile

Until we

Both Grow❗

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

“ Public Diary, of an Urban Poet

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  • yes...

  • But how will you know when you've both grown sufficiently to be in a mature relationship? (I'm still trying to figure that one out.)

  • Very well done ♥️

  • JamaisWang3 years ago

    AMAZING!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Magnificent!!! Loving this!!!

  • J. Delaney-Howe3 years ago

    Great advice in your last line. Nice work.

  • I loved how wonderful this was!

  • Beautifully worded and very important message!!!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Love this - wonderful as always and amazing message, my friend!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Aww, let's wait awhile. I loved that line! Wonderful work :)

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    I love it! it reminds me of that Janet Jackson song: Let's wait awhile! Stellar writing! Go lil bro go! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

  • Test3 years ago

    Nice one, Lonzo!

  • C.Z.3 years ago

    Snaps! I liked this a lot, the prose is lovely. I think the only thing that threw me a little was the emoji exclamation points. But the words themselves are very well written!

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    Well said, Lonzo!

  • RP3 years ago

    *snapping my fingers* great poem 💖💖

  • Pamela Williams3 years ago

    Beautiful and thought provoking.

  • This is a beautiful poem that resonates with me. In it, I could almost hear the voice of my mother. She used to tell me that we have the capacity to love anyone we want. She said everyone has flaws, and that the trick to finding happiness in love was to find someone whose flaws you could live with. Thank you for posting this!

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    ❤️ sage advice beautifully written.

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