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Dance With The Devil

Only myself to blame

By Alexander McEvoyPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 2 min read
Dance With The Devil
Photo by Zoltan Tasi on Unsplash

Brown eyes staring up at me

Arms looped round my neck

The smallest smile on your perfect lips

In the waning moonlight you seem to shine

Everything I ever hoped could be mine.

My hands rest on your hips

So lost in you I never thought to check

Behind the lies of who you pretend to be.

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Remembered taste of you

Lingers in every leaping shadow cast by firelight

Claws dig ever deeper

Raking my soul across the flames

But I'm just one of many names

In a book of broken hearts from all those weaker

Or too scared to take flight

From the terrible things you make us do

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Perfect lips in a perfect face

Alluring smile

Easy grace

Making me run to keep the pace

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Losing weight and life and love

Strength has fled from arms once firm

Hoping to keep you in my arms forever

All the while knowing I could never

Be more than something that you watch squirm

In the moonlight from far above

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Desperately I hope and strive

For what I need to feel alive

Your touch against my face

I'll burn the world to earn a place

Standing next to you among the ashes

Stained by blood from my soul's own gashes

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Then one day you turn away,

Interest lost like autumn frost

Under the sun's reflected light, while in my soul burns passion bright.

Your wonderous laugh, cut me clean in half

My service done; you say you've won

But I ran a one-man race, never believing you could replace

All that I could be to you. I am a person who

You could never love, though I thought we fit like hand in glove

All the signs were there to see, if only I had the strength to be

The kind of man who could walk away, and find true love a different day

Now you are all my thoughts, I am plagued by shoulds and oughts

Regret chokes my every goal, fighting me for control

Of the rest of my life, every moment filled with strife

Who could guess it wasn't right, dancing with you in the pale moonlight?

Free Versesad poetryStream of ConsciousnessMental Health

About the Creator

Alexander McEvoy

Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)

"The man of many series" - Donna Fox

I hope you enjoy my madness

AI is not real art!

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  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Oh crap. I read this a while ago and then didn't comment. Bad Paul, Bad ScottyScott. This is just haunting, heartbreaking and just written so wonderfully honest and unfiltered. I commend you for being so bare-all on the page/screen. Stunning work, truly, Alex!

  • ThatWriterWomanabout a year ago

    Dark and haunting - very well done!!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    So beautifully written and so heartbreaking!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh this was heartbreak on the page!! So well penned!!

  • That was soooo devastating! I think there's nothing worse than to find out that we've been replaced by someone else, by the person we love the most. Loved your poem so much!

  • Poppy about a year ago

    This is breathtaking. 'But I'm just one of many names In a book of broken hearts from all those weaker' Was initially my favourite lines but then I ended up finding too many to list. This poem had everything you want in a poem. And that ending was extraordinary.

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    You poured it all out with this one! That's real heartbreak!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Alex... I'd pick out my favourite lines and tell you how much I loved them but I fear I'd juts be writing your whole poem back to you... I'm breathless and left aching, in the best way!! Your vivi imagery and the way you seem to have just bled onto the "page" has left me in awe!! Beautiful work!!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Stained by blood from my soul's own gashes - wow!!

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Such a touching poem. Love the emotion it creates. And it’s very relatable too.

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