i was goin to get written off
you know…really smashed
so i bought a bottle
because i had the cash
there are many great expectations
but none greater than this
and i cant just wash them away
with a cheap bottle of piss
you got me going crazy
in so many different ways
you got me counting slowly
minutes hours days
(till i see you again)
you got me going crazy
(going crazy)
sort of in control,
but everything’s kind of lazy
you got me going crazy
(going crazy)
look into my eyes, look and see my hazy
(…and it’s brilliant)
i lay there half drunk
wishing you were here
the room was spinning my head was swimming
but my thoughts were crystal clear
i was hoping that you would come
and knock upon my door
but the fog of a drunken reality descended
so i simply drank some more
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Nice work! I especially liked the lines: "you got me counting slowly / minutes, hours, days." And the ending definitely packed a punch too!
Wonderfully expressive, Brenton 💕🙂