Comparisons
of first times
Like a flower feeling the warmth of the sun for the first time
A sapling tasting the first drops of rain on its leaves
A mother hearing her newborn child cry for the first time
A bee first drawn by the fragrant scent of sweet pollen
I fell in love with you the first time I looked in your eyes
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Bruce Lee and The God of War: Kuan Ti
It starts with love.. The Power to the God Of War and Wealth Walk into a Chinese restaurant (even in Oklahoma, USA), a Chinese police station, a kung fu martial arts studio or even a Chinese temple and you often see a red faced warrior holding a heavy quan-do (spear like weapon).
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Sweet cogitations of first times, it bring one’s mind to the calm feeling of gratitude, which brings calmness to the mind. So this poem gave me a peace of mind. Thank you for sharing.
Will this is such a beautiful piece and sooo expertly crafted with the personification of these heartwarming natural elements!!
gorgeous work TIW!
I loved this poem, it was beautiful and excellent, well done!
Awww, this was so sweet! Loved your poem!
Oh this was beautiful.
Thus is so romantic. Well done.
Awww such beautiful comparisons of love at first sight.
Beautiful...!!!