Comfort
For The Vocal "Get Comfortable" Challenge
This is my first new entry into the Vocal "Get Comfortable" Challenge
This is an attempt at a Fibonacci poem (FIB) brought to my attention by Dharrsheena Raja Segarran’s poem “The Teardrop Crown” which you can read below, but with an acrostic format which requires an extra line.
The typical fib is a six-line, 20-syllable poem with a syllable count by line of 1/1/2/3/5/8 - with as many syllables per line as the line's corresponding place in the Fibonacci sequence, but to fit the word COMFORT as an acrostic this needs an extra 13-syllable final line.
Come
On
My Love
ForWe Are
Out In The Garden
Roses For My Beautiful Love
To Be In Comfort In Each Others Arms As We Kiss
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very nice.
Thank you so much for the shoutout! 😁 And whoaaa you took it up a notch by combining an Acrostic and Fibonacci! That's fantastic! It's not easy but you did it! Very well done! 💖
Lovely & loved this inspirational poem for the challenge!!!👏❤😊💕
I love it! Great minds think alike 🖤