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Thunder, Tornado
Silence before the sky's storm
Thunderstorm brewing
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Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (11)
A powerful and evocative trio of words. The contrast between the gentle silence and the impending storm creates a sense of anticipation and awe.👍✨
Ooh, Mariann this is intense! You really captured the build-up, that stillness before everything breaks loose. The storm’s energy practically jumps off the page!✨🤗
I'm just seeing this haiku 15 days after you published it. I can't imagine why I'd freakin love it so much!!! ⚡🤔
Really liked this one.
Well done!!
Superbly expressed!!!
well written haiku, loved the entry Thunder Tornado sounds very catchy👌
So lovely how you taught us through this haiku, what to look for when the thunderstorm is brewing. You connected our mind and spirit with the sky and its plans. So thoughtful and masterfully done.
This was so ominous! Loved your poem!
Nicely done 😁.
Great poem Mariann, well done 😁