I let You go Up
The Wind leads you up the sky
Have you reached your peak?
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Compelling and original writing
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Comments (17)
This is a beautiful and evocative poem. The imagery is vivid and the emotions are raw and honest. The feeling of letting go and trusting the wind is captured perfectly.
Glorious kites… so exhilarating 💖.
I love a kite. The freedom in this is palpable.
Love the inspirational feeling of this one ❤️
Wonderful 💜
Very creative and inspirational piece, I love it!💕
Oh, how meaningful! Just love this <3
Love the question at the end
This sky-ku requires some introspection from the reader. Nicely done!
Surprisingly deep. A great entry, Mariann!
A perfectly worded question
Beautiful, Mariann! I love kites and can watch them forever.
I agree with Heather, that last line was so deep. Loved your poem!
Very nicely done.
Lovely imagery Mariann
Excellent work Mariann! 💪🏾
That last line felt so much deeper than just about a kite. Made me stop and think. Great picture to go with the poetry :)