Clarity Alongside Chaos
A realist's best-case scenario
The wind catches in my giant silver hoops
Tiny vortexes spiraling past my ears
Wailing gently
Like a conch shell
Or a bubble wand
Or the sigh of my soul as I perch high in a church
for a God in which I have no faith
My thoughts vacillating from purest piety to deepest sin
From ecstasy to agony
On two uncoordinated sine curves,
Intersecting in a pattern too complex
for my mortal mind to comprehend
I give thanks for it all
I shiver with peace
I shiver with fear
I shiver with rebellion
I shiver with cold too
Yet I am content
When bells chime with incessant jubilance
Or wind channels its keening directly into my ear canal
I am overwhelmed with noise
And I hear the poetry
My mind is a storm in a teacup
A macchiato monsoon
Deliciously bitter, and charged with all the divine radiance of lightning
That parts oily charcoal clouds
for brief moments of clarity alongside chaos
About the Creator
Violet P. Davies
Words make me feel fulfilled occasionally.
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Comments (14)
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lovely piece
Very unique and really let's one see your passion for writing.
You have a really gorgeous style to your work. Absolutely a pleasure to read!
Love this!!! I felt very connected, and related to it tremendously.
Exceptional work! congratulations!❤️
Nice poem. Congrats on Top Story!
A macchiato monsoon, I love it!
Such lovely imagary and loved the couch shell one especially.
Beautiful. Inspiring. I love the image too. I hope you don't mind, I'm going to look for it and see what it inspires. I love seeing it when other people use the same image I have, but write something I may have never thought of.
This is a wowser moment. Love the way you weaved the words on this one. Congrats on Top Story. You have a new subscriber!
great poem and congrats on the top story!
Peace. A moment of peace. Where things align. That's what I get from this. And midnight mass on Christmas Eve. That too. I loved this.
This felt so intense. Loved your poem!