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Cigarettes

are bad for ya health

By BrenPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Cigarettes
Photo by Aman Upadhyay on Unsplash

and ill be dammed

if my wife’s cigarette

doesn't smell good

hanging on the still

afternoon air

caught in this balmy pre rain

pressure drop

my wife walks past

i get her scent

along with the cigarette

i go into the house

i could follow her blind

to this trail of hers

i'm bound

and parts of me i thought i lost

were some of the parts she found

it's all pleasant smells

and small afternoon hells

with this lady

she's my gal oh for sure

without a doubt

but how in the name of everything holy

did she get mixed up with me?

she is truly a princess

of the quiet afternoon

she glows like the gardens

she tends

she smiles she snarls

she bows she bends

and

i know

i'll see

that smile

tomorrow

.

I wrote this "before" but never posted it. Kicking myself a bit ay!

love poems

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    Smoking beautiful, Brenton; I had to read this one twice! 💙

  • Andrew C McDonald2 months ago

    This is a quietly beautiful testament to love.

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