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Cigarettes And Attitudes

Off With Ya

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Cigarettes And Attitudes
Photo by Talles Alves on Unsplash

You talk a lot for one,

who don't even know me

That cigarette glows,

hanging, just off your lip.

You think you know of things

that you've never seen

A puppet on a string

and you're turned up to mean

Want things you can't have

have the things you don't want

Reputation, a gaffe

your face all haggard and gaunt

Song and dance, un-choreographed

could have been a place, that you regularly haunt

What's that? Speak up, why ya being so quiet?

So bold to tell the tale, when nobody's around

Want it your way, when you can't you're defiant

It's fine time that someone brings you down to the ground

Life is unforgiving, when you lie in the mud

even worse when you take others with you

Stay away from me, contagious, with your bad blood

the morbid way you live is askew

slam poetry

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock2 years ago

    I've never smoked but I used to like the smell. I think it was because the only times I smelled them we were off doing something fun.

  • J. S. Wade2 years ago

    Smokin words Kelli. Tell it like it is. 🥰

  • This was awesomeeee! Sadly, there are many people like this!

  • Oh the attitudes! Brilliant and to the point.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!! Living it!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Jay Kantor2 years ago

    Dear 'k' - I'm so not a Cig-Fan: May I share something with you from my Short ~ 'Encounters' - "As I pulled into the parking lot, I happened to notice a man with his feet hanging/dangling out of the open door of his brand-new car (it still had dealer tags on it) while taking long drags on a cigarette. I couldn't resist making a comment. I said, 'THAT must be your wife's car? This way you're only getting 1/2 of the smoke wafting through that new car smell – Coulda fooled ME" 'j'

  • Ooh, I Love it ♥️💯✌️📝🚬😒

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Burn!!! love it!

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