You talk a lot for one,
who don't even know me
That cigarette glows,
hanging, just off your lip.
You think you know of things
that you've never seen
A puppet on a string
and you're turned up to mean
Want things you can't have
have the things you don't want
Reputation, a gaffe
your face all haggard and gaunt
Song and dance, un-choreographed
could have been a place, that you regularly haunt
What's that? Speak up, why ya being so quiet?
So bold to tell the tale, when nobody's around
Want it your way, when you can't you're defiant
It's fine time that someone brings you down to the ground
Life is unforgiving, when you lie in the mud
even worse when you take others with you
Stay away from me, contagious, with your bad blood
the morbid way you live is askew
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (8)
I've never smoked but I used to like the smell. I think it was because the only times I smelled them we were off doing something fun.
Smokin words Kelli. Tell it like it is. 🥰
This was awesomeeee! Sadly, there are many people like this!
Oh the attitudes! Brilliant and to the point.
Awesome!!! Living it!!!💕❤️❤️
Dear 'k' - I'm so not a Cig-Fan: May I share something with you from my Short ~ 'Encounters' - "As I pulled into the parking lot, I happened to notice a man with his feet hanging/dangling out of the open door of his brand-new car (it still had dealer tags on it) while taking long drags on a cigarette. I couldn't resist making a comment. I said, 'THAT must be your wife's car? This way you're only getting 1/2 of the smoke wafting through that new car smell – Coulda fooled ME" 'j'
Ooh, I Love it ♥️💯✌️📝🚬😒
Burn!!! love it!