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Castles In Air

A reverse Poem

By simplicityPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

Just a doltish character
Never believe
In me
Expert level just a far off dream
As I sweep and clean for the sweepers and cleaners
Are there even rungs?!
What does passion prove?!
My attitude
A corner of me knows, in its deepest inner place
The skies the limit from my vantage point
Bottoms up
Before another grueling day and after building castles in air each night
It too shall pass
Like life

*after reading the last line read the lines in reverse



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Outstanding

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  • Anna 2 years ago

    Awesome!

  • Test2 years ago

    That was some fantastic writing!

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