Canoeing
A Day on the Lake
Cool water waving
Splashing against the canoe
The sun beating down
*
No phones, computers,
Just you and me in a boat,
Stuck with each other
*
Sandwiches, soda,
Our nourishment for the day
Eating nostalgia
*
Talking and rowing
Temporarily at peace
Alone, together
*
Sitting together
In the middle of the lake
Side by side, open
*
A wet, dirty rock
Playing therapist today,
Unseen confidante
*
Speaking secret thoughts
Kept from each other so long
No bars being held
*
No yelling, banging,
No hiding from the fighting,
Just the lake and us
*
Father and daughter
Raising the white flag of truce
For only one day
About the Creator
Stephanie Hoogstad
With a BA in English and MSc in Creative Writing, writing is my life. I have edited and ghost written for years with some published stories and poems of my own.
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A heartfelt moment of connection and healing between father and daughter, where nature becomes the silent mediator of unspoken words.
So lovely and peaceful.
Beautiful
loved it, thank you Stephanie for sharing this with us.
It’s never too late for a top story it seems! Well done on this being pulled from the archives 🥰😇 It’s beautiful
I felt immersed in this poem. Magical and sweet.
Congratulations on your TS. I enjoyed it.
Heartwarming and beautifully-observed piece of work. (I took a more downbeat approach to kayaking recently https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/deep-shore%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 😬) Congratulations on the much-belated Top Story! 🙏😁
I like your structure in this piece with a relevant message. Good work on your top story! 😊
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Such a beautiful and peaceful moment captured in words
Lovely poetic reflection of bonding with both nature and another. Well done. Congratulations on being selected for this week's Vocal Raise Your Voice Thread - well done!
Unique moments captured in a simple yet completely meaningful way - nostalgia awakens.
Beautifully written.
Loved this!! The bit about the white flag made me chuckle a bit :)
Stephanie, this was so beautiful!! Well done! I love the overall feel of this piece!! Great work!!
Such a poignant moment recaptured, the idea of eating nostalgia is such a beautiful one 🤍 Funny the moments of calm we remember - beautiful!
This is gorgeous! "Sandwiches, soda, Our nourishment for the day Eating nostalgia" Love that stanza! And that ending was so impactful! Really well done
Ah, I can't see that white flag staying intact with my dad.
Awww, this was absolutely wonderful! Also, I feel like having a sandwich now, lol. Loved your poem!
awesome nostalgia
It is nice when something is so beautiful and peaceful that everything else is put on hold. This is lovely in so many ways
Depending upon the relative ages of father & daughter, he could be learning a lot, lol. (Our father always does when the eight of us kids get together with him. He just turned 90.)