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Bodies Of Water

Blue Haiku

By Alfie JanePublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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I crossed the oceans.

You won't step over puddles.

Whose life is ruined?

sad poetry

About the Creator

Alfie Jane

A wandering soul who writes about anything and everything. Former expat, future cook and writer. Will take any challenge that comes her way.

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  • Rayn B3 years ago

    Love the comparison of oceans and puddles

  • Nani3 years ago

    This is really good. It says a lot with such limited syllables. Awesome.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Splendid!!!

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