Blue Truths
Nobody can tell you how the blues feel unless they have the blues. We all take it differently. ~ Otis Rush
By Caroline JanePublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by George Dumitrache on Unsplash
They wept as they played
knotted strings of dried-up tears.
Untangling their truth.
About the Creator
Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters


Comments (11)
As a guitarist, this really nailed it. Great job!
This is beautifully worded and thought-out. How by playing their knotted strings they could untangle their truth...beautiful, profound; love it!
Is this how you get your inspiration?
I just subscribed to you 💕
Aww so sweet 🥰
Tear tracks as tangled ropes is a compelling image. 🙂
Very nice and open to interpretation. Love it
Impressive!!!💕😊💖
Very creative. Love it.
Love it! :)
Amazing yet again, and really original too