Dreams of Sky
Listen to the colour of your dreams ~ The Beatles
By Caroline JanePublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Peter Bromley on Unsplash
Beneath thick knit leaves,
the forest floor knows no sky.
Yet still dreams of it.
About the Creator
Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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Comments (7)
great perspective
OH, I love this! Great work!
Oooh I love this! Sounds like a more traditional haiku in terms of the “wisdom” (not that I’m an expert at haikus by any means 😂). Well done!
oh I don't know if it is cliche...the metaphor certainly works well!
So motivational!!! 💕😊💖
Wow. This is great.
Wow that's fab!