‧ blink ‧
Entry for Happiness and Light, Unofficial Challenge
blink
if you feel sad
close your eyes
say goodbye
to this world
blink
open them
and see the world unveiled
shiny
recreated
moment by moment
new
and you
are new
too
blink
yesterday's sludge falls away
heavy like a wedding train
if you let it
so unclip it
feel it drop
feel how light you are without it
go ahead and spin
giddy
that laughter
is yours
sprinkling stars across the galaxy
from a brand new throat
blink
tomorrow is light as a feather
and how wonderful it is
that you are here
in this sparkling moment
blink
the now:
an ever-present
seed of palpable joy
it's yours
now
which means
always
and if you forget
just
blink
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Entry for John and Paul's challenge:
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L.C. Schäfer
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Comments (18)
Congratulations on 2nd place in our unofficial challenge, LC! You should receive your tip shortly.
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This truly is magical as John said It felt genuine and I felt calmer for reading it. Thank you for entering! As I am finally reading through the entries and catching up with John we should have the results this week.
👏👏👏loved this, it is so calming. This in spoken word could fend off a panic attack.
Nice work, L.C. Best of luck in the challenge!
I am having troubles with this challenge and hoped yours would inspire. This is so unlike the LC we’ve come to know and love, is it satirical, a mockery or is there a happy person in there hiding behind wit and tormented twists. I really enjoyed this
I kept waiting for the speedy pickpocket, the stab in the back, or other twisted Schafer shenanigan. Joke's on me, the real twist was SINCERITY all through.
A delightfully inspiring poem. I especially like: “blink tomorrow is light as a feather and how wonderful it is that you are here in this sparkling moment”💖
Simply magic, no matter what you write.
Lovely! Just need that moment to renew, change our mindset
"Happiness and Light" it is! Blink. Blink-blinkety-blink-bliiiiiiiinkk 😁 Yeah baybeee!
Like resetting. ❤️ lovely poem
This is such a lovely, uplifting piece. Simple yet full of magic. ✨
Not me thinking you're telling us to kill ourselves when you said close your eyes and tell the world goodbye, lol. Loved your poem!
A change of focus, even if for only a blink!
Putting power in such a simple action, this was beautiful and a great take for the challenge <3
Such a beautiful poem, LC. I wish we could just blink away our troubles and unhappiness.
I like that adviced. Blink like its magic and everything will renew ✨️ 💛