Blade
For The Vocal Breakup Nonet Challenge
Blade
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You Hold The Bloody Blade In Your Hand
Hourglass Leaks A Stream Of Red Sand
Flows With Fading Love And Life
End For Your Hate And Strife
My Murder, Your Goal
Slaughtered My Soul
Now We Part
My Heart
Stabbed
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Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred
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Comments (7)
Wow. This is excellent. Well done, Mike.
Well-wrought!
This has a very Romeo and Juliet vibe to it. I love the dark take on the challenge. Well done, Mike!
Slaughtered my soul, I especially loved that! Loved your poem!
The violent tendencies of those in various kinds of relationships.
Vividly violent! Well wrought, Mike!
That was a painful blow ending