Blackberry Pie
A nostalgic look at the joy of picking your own and baking at home
Basket adorning my wrist
Kid gloves to cover my fist
Through sweet magnolia fields
To the sweet taste the thorny blackberry yields
Ah the smells, the sights, the laughter
As my siblings and friends chase ever after
Sweet nectar, honeysuckle and blossoms
Raccoons, deer, snakes, rabbits, possums
Yes, we did indeed pick those wild mountain berries
Bringing home bloodied fingers, blackberry and cherry
I shall never forget the aroma from the oven
As my sister and I would be shoving
Each other none too gently out of the way
While mom shooed; "Y'all git now," she'd say
Ah those pies made from the fruits of our pickings
Joyful desserts that had us finger licking
Our pies weren't made by Little Debbie nor Sarah Lee
They were bought by thorn scratched hands and bended knee
They tasted all the better, that I definitely know
Even though the memory is over a foggy drift of decades
Still, mom's homemade pies get the best accolades
I tried to get my kids to pick up a basket
Unfortunately, they'll sooner pick up my casket
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Comments (2)
Very well written and filled with memories from an era long gone now I'm afraid!
Oh no, that last line! Your childhood seems so wonderful!