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Blackberry Pie

A nostalgic look at the joy of picking your own and baking at home

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Blackberry Pie
Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash

Basket adorning my wrist

Kid gloves to cover my fist

Through sweet magnolia fields

To the sweet taste the thorny blackberry yields

Ah the smells, the sights, the laughter

As my siblings and friends chase ever after

Sweet nectar, honeysuckle and blossoms

Raccoons, deer, snakes, rabbits, possums

Yes, we did indeed pick those wild mountain berries

Bringing home bloodied fingers, blackberry and cherry

I shall never forget the aroma from the oven

As my sister and I would be shoving

Each other none too gently out of the way

While mom shooed; "Y'all git now," she'd say

Ah those pies made from the fruits of our pickings

Joyful desserts that had us finger licking

Our pies weren't made by Little Debbie nor Sarah Lee

They were bought by thorn scratched hands and bended knee

They tasted all the better, that I definitely know

Even though the memory is over a foggy drift of decades

Still, mom's homemade pies get the best accolades

I tried to get my kids to pick up a basket

Unfortunately, they'll sooner pick up my casket

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About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Bren2 years ago

    Very well written and filled with memories from an era long gone now I'm afraid!

  • Oh no, that last line! Your childhood seems so wonderful!

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