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Beyond Me

Skin Deep

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2024

And the music plays on

My thoughts give no release

One after the other

Claiming small parts of me

Watching the clouds

Reading the signs

Storm clouds are brewing

I’m running out of time

Out of patience and money

No other options arise

Pulling out all the stops

Fueling the fire in my eyes

Until the beat can take over

Calming the beast here inside

Ripping and clawing

Tearing flesh from my hide

It's all written down

displayed on my skin

Some forsaken clown

With a painted-on grin

Each day, like the next

Changing adverbs for nouns

Scribbled there on my neck

Subtly whittled down

Until my independence

Has become cookie cutter

Never need to finish a sentence

Because they prefer dumber

They don't want me to think

It only adds to the clutter

Pour me something to drink

So, I will never discover

That I am just like the rest

Exactly like every other

That had something to say

That just might challenge the drummer

Opinions get in the way

When you don't follow form

So, they keep me sedated

A soft, pliable worm

Easy to control

They just adjust the rhythm

A fish in their bowl

That just keeps on swimming

If I ever have doubt

Or feel that I am sinking

I simply pull my mirror out

And read what I should be thinking

Mental HealthStream of Consciousnesssurreal poetryslam poetry

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Testabout a year ago

    It’s also very relatable I think.

  • Testabout a year ago

    This is beautiful

  • Damn this was so we'll timed, see you on stage slammin' this dressed liked Billie Ellish.

  • Dame Cassabout a year ago

    Abosolutly beautiful

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    “Changing adverbs for nouns” is one of so many genius lines in this! Bravo, Kelli!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Such a great stream of consciousness. Congratulations on the Top Story, too!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Loved this slam piece!! 'So, they keep me sedated/A soft, pliable worm' and these lines just felt too relatable. Congrats on TS!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    There it is. Congrats on the TS.

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your TS!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    This was a beat down in a rap style, poetic justice that I adore 🥰

  • Farah about a year ago

    I loved this!

  • Chisomabout a year ago

    This is very nice and dark. I really resonated with this. I am a dark poetry writer myself and I have to say, great job.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Well done on TS! "It's all written down/displayed on my skin/Some forsaken clown/With a painted-on grin" was my favourite bit, but soft pliant worm came a close second 😁

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    This was really intense. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Congratulations on the top story! Beautiful✨

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Creative and impressive!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This sounds like living life with all the ups and downs that occur. Good work.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Uh.. I don't even know what to say. This is one of the best things I've ever read. Outstanding 👏👏

  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    another masterpiece, TS candidate for sure on this one. :) great work.

  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒about a year ago

    Ooohh, I love this, Kelli! I got some “1984” vibes from this. I especially loved this line: “Some forsaken clown With a painted-on grin.” Nice!

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