Beyond Me
Skin Deep

And the music plays on
My thoughts give no release
One after the other
Claiming small parts of me
Watching the clouds
Reading the signs
Storm clouds are brewing
I’m running out of time
Out of patience and money
No other options arise
Pulling out all the stops
Fueling the fire in my eyes
Until the beat can take over
Calming the beast here inside
Ripping and clawing
Tearing flesh from my hide
It's all written down
displayed on my skin
Some forsaken clown
With a painted-on grin
Each day, like the next
Changing adverbs for nouns
Scribbled there on my neck
Subtly whittled down
Until my independence
Has become cookie cutter
Never need to finish a sentence
Because they prefer dumber
They don't want me to think
It only adds to the clutter
Pour me something to drink
So, I will never discover
That I am just like the rest
Exactly like every other
That had something to say
That just might challenge the drummer
Opinions get in the way
When you don't follow form
So, they keep me sedated
A soft, pliable worm
Easy to control
They just adjust the rhythm
A fish in their bowl
That just keeps on swimming
If I ever have doubt
Or feel that I am sinking
I simply pull my mirror out
And read what I should be thinking
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (20)
It’s also very relatable I think.
This is beautiful
Damn this was so we'll timed, see you on stage slammin' this dressed liked Billie Ellish.
Abosolutly beautiful
“Changing adverbs for nouns” is one of so many genius lines in this! Bravo, Kelli!
Such a great stream of consciousness. Congratulations on the Top Story, too!
Loved this slam piece!! 'So, they keep me sedated/A soft, pliable worm' and these lines just felt too relatable. Congrats on TS!!
There it is. Congrats on the TS.
Congratulations on your TS!
This was a beat down in a rap style, poetic justice that I adore 🥰
I loved this!
This is very nice and dark. I really resonated with this. I am a dark poetry writer myself and I have to say, great job.
Well done on TS! "It's all written down/displayed on my skin/Some forsaken clown/With a painted-on grin" was my favourite bit, but soft pliant worm came a close second 😁
This was really intense. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Congratulations on the top story! Beautiful✨
Creative and impressive!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕
This sounds like living life with all the ups and downs that occur. Good work.
Uh.. I don't even know what to say. This is one of the best things I've ever read. Outstanding 👏👏
another masterpiece, TS candidate for sure on this one. :) great work.
Ooohh, I love this, Kelli! I got some “1984” vibes from this. I especially loved this line: “Some forsaken clown With a painted-on grin.” Nice!