Born to light, she fell,
Crushed by hands that fear the starsโ
Peace can't bloom on earth~
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๐Can't we just all find peace & love for once๐
Storyline- This angelic being of light was put on earth, but her thoughts of peace and love were betrayed. Indicating there is a never-ending war.
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical
~๐ข๐ฝ๐ธ๐ป๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ผ ๐ฌ๐ช๐ท ๐ซ๐ฎ ๐ช ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ฝ๐ต๐ฎ ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐น~
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Let's Don't Do This
"I just can't do this anymore..." "Do what?" What can't you do? Put gas in your own car? I swear to God you make me take care of everything, don't you? You know I'm on my way to work right now but that never stops you from bothering me, does it?"
By Shirley Belk7 days ago in Fiction
Comments (9)
Universal love and peaceโฆ a beautiful dreamโฆ yet out of reach. Such a beautiful powerful poem in so few words! Exceptional work!
Oh my, that's powerful. I simply love that second line, sad as it is.
Angelic being, please don't give up on us humans!
Heyyyy Kodah! My commenting ability was revoked on 15 May and only now I'm able to comment. That's why I've only been reading and hearting your stuff without commenting.
That middle line - oof. Exceptional. Well done Kodah.
Ah, the ever-elusive dream of peace. Great poem, Kodah <3
Noooooo I want the peace and light! She can shine bright โฆcanโt she? ๐ซถ๐ป๐ซถ๐ปโค๏ธ๐ฅฐ The light of God surround usโฆ do you know the prayer of protection? It is beautiful. After the ugly will be beauty, just how long to there?
Oof, this is haunting and lovely! Sometimes it really feels like Earth isn't built for gentle soulsโฆ but dang, we still keep hoping, donโt we? ๐
I agree. Can't we just all find peace & love for once?